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  • As a matter of fact 事實上

As a matter of fact, going on a working holiday is an eye-opening experience.

事實上,去工作假期會是一個令人大開眼界的體驗。

 

  • Most important of all 最重要的是

Most important of all, giving blood is beneficial for both the donor and the receiver.

最重要的是,捐血是有益於捐贈者和接受者。

 

  • Without any questions 毫無疑問地

Without any questions, catching up with the trend in changing smartphone once a year, can be too luxurious for underprivileged families.

毫無疑問地,每年換一年智能手機以跟上潮流,對基層家庭而言是一件過分奢侈的事。

 

  • The chief characteristic 主要的特徵

The chief characteristic of young people who avoid social contact is that they push others away from their comfort zone.

嘗試避免社交的年輕人的主要特徵是,他們把其他人排除在自己的安全圈之外。

 

  • To some extent 在某程度上

To some extent, working in Shenzhen can allow people to attain a better quality of life, due to the lower cost of living and it being less crowded.

 

在某程度上,在深圳工作可以有更好的生活質素,如較低的生活支出和沒有那麼擁擠。

 

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